Week 3 prompt B

a.)Little do we think about the contributions that this elementary particle has made not only to industrial society but to the human condition.
b.)Little do we think about the contributions that this elementary particle has made not only to industrial society but, to the human condition.

a.)Without it the mechanics of thought would be all but impossible.
b.)Without it, the mechanics of thought would be all but impossible.

a.)Right now as you read this you brain is computing something on the order of ten petaFLOPS, or about 1,000,000,000,000,000 FLoating point Operations Per Second.
b.)Right now, as you read this, your brain is computing something on the order of ten petaFLOPS, or about 1,000,000,000,000,000 FLoating point Operations Per Second.

a.)This amount of processing power is above and beyond the most powerful computers on the planet, the fastest of which is “Road Runner” located in Los Alamos National laboratory, which only has the processing power of about 1.7 petaFLOPS.
b.)This amount of processing power is above and beyond the most powerful computers on the planet, which only have the processing power of about 1.7 petaFLOPS.

a.)Neither the computer nor your brain would be capable of processing anything without the electron.
b.)But, neither the computer nor your brain would be capable of processing anything without the electron.

a.)But I think it’s time to sit back and contemplate the particle that makes our world possible.
b.)But, I think it’s time to sit back and contemplate the particle that makes our world possible.

This exercise helped me to better use, and know where to use, commas and other marks used in modern english. It also helped me to better focus my paper on thoughts that pertain to my paper. There were other places in my paper that kind became off topic, buy now they have been remedied. I know that as you read these examples you can become more well acquainted with what is appropriate to include in your english projects. 45min